Poetry's questions - English iziqna

What are brown people?

9 answers · 2 days ago
Best answer: people

You made me feel loved, when I already accepted I was unloveable. You took that back. You made me feel worthy, when I already felt worthless. You took that back. You made me feel comfortable in my own skin, when I already felt uncomfortable living in it. You took that back. You made me feel alive, when I already... show more

We kicked them out our eyes did gleam, They demanded their dream a nightmare it seems, Was what they gleaned from their little scheme. What do you think of my poem so far?

Best answer: Some great vocabulary in this. It's refreshing to see something beyond the usual teen angst and cliche love poems we see here. The end rhyme contributes some great humor to the piece.


Feedback, please?

8 answers · 1 week ago
Best answer: Hopefully this doesn't represent you feeling your worst, though the premise certainly fits many, and not poetically. The piece is OK, but could use some work; for one making it more pointed, harsh, true to life, though you can certainly show you're maintaining hope.


Feedback for my poem?

5 answers · 1 week ago
Best answer: I like it you got talent.

What do you think of this poem?

8 answers · 6 days ago
Best answer: Its hilarious and should be in a book.

What do you think about my poem?

6 answers · 5 days ago
Feels light as a butterfly As frail as skin Hollow as a shell Invisible as the wind Complacent as in time going by

Best answer: Assuming you mean what Cogito asked, I would hazard a few guesses. War means death, breaking up of families, huge changes to life, starting over. All very stressful things to people. Moreso to those who have actually experienced those.

Best answer: Yes, I persuaded them to get a job.

Really need some ones help to understand this text. What is means`? " As other girls prayed for handsomeness in a lover, or for wealth, or for power, or for poetry, she had prayed fervently: let him be kind"

In my english class my teacher is obsessed with poems. He told us to write one to start of our poetry unit. The theme was emotion... kinda vague but whatever! :) Any who there is no format for this poem so i kind of just went off and wrote down whatever. If anyone willing would like to edit it in any way?... show more

Best answer: Poor but lived in a park, sneaking around after dark, a few friends that I did like, got a gift by finding a bike. We always had fun,ever dirt poor, taking back bottles to the grocery store, A nickel each, made a dollar to spend, plus my family was my friend. Rich or poor regardless of what you've been... show more

I need something before "should have fled". This what I have so far... Haunted by the past and present Wondering where all the time went Chain yourself to your death bed ..........................should have fled

Recently I've written poetry regarding depression that Ive been suffering from for some time. I have been wondering if I should share these people that I know because it may help them understand depression and me better. However, I am scared of receiving ridicule for sharing these poems with others. Any... show more


Can some help me with a dark poem?

6 answers · 1 week ago
I need something before "should have fled". This what I have so far... Haunted by the past and present Wondering where all the time went Chain yourself to your death bed ..........................should have fled

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